Breaking – by Estrella Azul

I’m falling in love
with the white foamy waves,
the salty smell of the air
and grainy soft sand
finding seashells and jellyfish;
As I watch,
as I feel,
the waves washing over,
and the ocean breaking –
on the beachrocks of my heart…

Breaking by EstrellaAzul

17 Responses to “Breaking – by Estrella Azul”

  1. I can guess what’s been on your mind lately! :)

  2. Lovely.

  3. I held my breath – relieved there was no “heartbreaking on the rocks” turn of phrase. With that avoided, I enjoyed it. Don’t we all love the beach?

    • So glad your expectations were met and you enjoyed the poem :)
      I think this love of the beach and ocean is growing to be that one true love I’ll carry in my heart forever, no matter where I am!

  4. wow…this is really nice :) great job :)

  5. Love it – love it – love it!!! Wow… I feel what you are feeling and wow… Thank you!!!!!!!!! <3

  6. Gorgeous Estrella! You said exactly how I feel when I visit the beach, I just love it. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

  7. this makes me want the beach! i love that last line. :)

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