Predictable – by Estrella Azul

- Just where do you think you’re going with that?!

Maybe she’s asking another family member.

- Can you hear me, honey? I’m talking to you.

Oh, darn… You are talking to me.

- No! Stop right there!

Maybe if I go left, she’ll leave me alone.

- No!

Go right then?

- Don’t you dare take another step, Mister!

Oh, come on!

- How many times do I have to repeat myself?

But…

- Take that filthy thing out of my kitchen!

But it’s mine!

- Give it here then.

No!

- Come on, give it!

Nooo!

- I’m taking it to the garbage now. And don’t let me catch you looking for it.

You know how long it took me to catch that freakin’ mouse?

- Understood, kitten?

Fine…

I’ll go catch and try to sneak another one in. You’re bound to go write a flash about this.

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26 Responses to “Predictable – by Estrella Azul”

  1. Wow – amazing! I love it so much! You really understood the roles of the characters so well – and so succinctly – great! :D

  2. SO glad my dog doesn’t do this! :)

  3. Cool dialogue. Not a cat person myself, but I can so see this happening.
    Adam B @revhappiness

  4. ha ha loved the dialogue and never guessed it was a cat with a mouse right up to the end. Well done!

  5. Liked it. “Naw, she can’t see me if I do not look at her….”

  6. When I was a kid, man-alive were there times when I wished someone wasn’t speaking to me when they obviously were…

  7. That’s just fun, Estrella. Thanks for putting a smile on my face today :-)

  8. I did not get that it was a cat either until the end! Very intelligent animal!

  9. Dialogue definitely had me thinking this was a mother and child situation – nice twist with the kitten and mouse.

  10. I’m a cat person so this worked for me straight away! Cute!

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