It never stops;
the hardship, the sadness.
They never stop;
the tears, the disappointments.
I wish they would stop.
I wish it would all just stop;
Just long enough to take a breath.
A glimpse of what matters to this writer most and what makes her heart beat a little faster

You can find my writing for #fridayflash right here in: The Creative Writing Corner of Estrella Azul category ;)
I would appreciate any constructive criticism you can offer, and thank you so much for reading!
It never stops;
the hardship, the sadness.
They never stop;
the tears, the disappointments.
I wish they would stop.
I wish it would all just stop;
Just long enough to take a breath.
Posted on 2012, September 14 at 12:12 PM in Life's mystery, Poems, The Creative Writing Corner of Estrella Azul | RSS feed | Respond | Trackback URL
sometimes all we can do is remember to keep breathing, no matter what else is happening. *Love* & *Hugs*
♥
Much *love* and *hugs* to you too, Dani; breathing is easier by now! <3
{hugs back}
Beautiful – simple words that say so much. I love it!
Thank you, Trisha – I also really like the simplicity in this.
No words, just hugs… hugs until you tell me it’s enough
*hugs back* we might be hugging for a while here, I’m not one to say that’s enough hugging
Thanks!
Thank makes me so sad. Hugs from me too!
Thank you, Tammy. Hugs to you too!
Sending love waves your way…
Thank you! *happy to receive*