Watch the time – by Estrella Azul

Before we parted ways,
he gifted me a watch.
Both of us felt it –
what was left of “us”
was only a matter of time.

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2 Comments to “Watch the time – by Estrella Azul”

  1. I really like the ambiguity of the third line, how it implies that they felt time literally and figuratively, how it suggests that although something that was precious is soon to be over it was felt deeply and truly while it lasted.

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